Comments on: Kicking Lines Around with a Theme http://www.songwritingtipsonline.com/blog/05/kicking-lines-around-with-a-theme/ Wed, 08 Sep 2010 00:01:31 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 By: Arden Ing http://www.songwritingtipsonline.com/blog/05/kicking-lines-around-with-a-theme/#comment-2170 Arden Ing Mon, 30 Aug 2010 20:10:58 +0000 http://songwritingtipsonline.com/blog/?p=101#comment-2170 Sick of obtaining low numbers of useless visitors to your website? Well i want to inform you of a brand new underground tactic that makes me personally $900 daily on 100% AUTOPILOT. I really could be here all day and going into detail but why dont you simply check their website out? There is a excellent video that explains everything. So if your seriously interested in making quick money this is the site for you. <a href="http://tiny.cc/p7mq4" rel="nofollow">Auto Traffic Avalanche</a> Sick of obtaining low numbers of useless visitors to your website? Well i want to inform you of a brand new underground tactic that makes me personally $900 daily on 100% AUTOPILOT. I really could be here all day and going into detail but why dont you simply check their website out? There is a excellent video that explains everything. So if your seriously interested in making quick money this is the site for you. Auto Traffic Avalanche

]]> By: Zane http://www.songwritingtipsonline.com/blog/05/kicking-lines-around-with-a-theme/#comment-91 Zane Wed, 30 May 2007 23:52:00 +0000 http://songwritingtipsonline.com/blog/?p=101#comment-91 Hey Shamir,laughter is the best cure for everything in my books,great Idea Shamir...Zane ;) Hey Shamir,laughter is the best cure for everything in my books,great Idea Shamir…Zane ;)

]]> By: Anonymous http://www.songwritingtipsonline.com/blog/05/kicking-lines-around-with-a-theme/#comment-90 Anonymous Tue, 29 May 2007 11:46:00 +0000 http://songwritingtipsonline.com/blog/?p=101#comment-90 This is an excellent brainstorming idea! <a HREF="www.larryberenguel.com" REL="nofollow">larry</a> This is an excellent brainstorming idea! larry

]]> By: Anonymous http://www.songwritingtipsonline.com/blog/05/kicking-lines-around-with-a-theme/#comment-87 Anonymous Sat, 26 May 2007 20:16:00 +0000 http://songwritingtipsonline.com/blog/?p=101#comment-87 Thats a great idea for coming up wit some slamming lines...I would do it... lol Thats a great idea for coming up wit some slamming lines…I would do it… lol

]]> By: Shamir Rele http://www.songwritingtipsonline.com/blog/05/kicking-lines-around-with-a-theme/#comment-86 Shamir Rele Sat, 26 May 2007 17:44:00 +0000 http://songwritingtipsonline.com/blog/?p=101#comment-86 Tom, yep good lyrics do come from the heart, from experience, and from taking a good hard look at the world.<br/><br/>I wouldn't deny it.<br/><br/>The intention was to write a song based on a <b>theme</b> of contradictions... but most importantly, I did say our best lines won't be published on this blog - hence the slight cheesiness with the lines your read ;-)<br/><br/>On the flip side, I have many idea's of what a 'good lyric' should entail. And it's not always about being lyrically clever.<br/><br/>What's your idea of a good lyric?<br/><br/>Shamir<br/><br/>PS. I love discussions - but I could do with less of the insults :-) Tom, yep good lyrics do come from the heart, from experience, and from taking a good hard look at the world.

I wouldn’t deny it.

The intention was to write a song based on a theme of contradictions… but most importantly, I did say our best lines won’t be published on this blog - hence the slight cheesiness with the lines your read ;-)

On the flip side, I have many idea’s of what a ‘good lyric’ should entail. And it’s not always about being lyrically clever.

What’s your idea of a good lyric?

Shamir

PS. I love discussions - but I could do with less of the insults :-)

]]> By: Tom http://www.songwritingtipsonline.com/blog/05/kicking-lines-around-with-a-theme/#comment-84 Tom Sat, 26 May 2007 15:52:00 +0000 http://songwritingtipsonline.com/blog/?p=101#comment-84 Indeed.... laughing is the only thing you can do sometimes.<br/><br/>What hilarious advice you give to these aspiring song writers. Surely good lyrics come from the heart, from experience, and from taking a good hard look at the world? These forced juxtapositions are a method to avoid actually writing a song with meaning and result in large-scale cringing.<br/><br/>Nice try though, Shammy Indeed…. laughing is the only thing you can do sometimes.

What hilarious advice you give to these aspiring song writers. Surely good lyrics come from the heart, from experience, and from taking a good hard look at the world? These forced juxtapositions are a method to avoid actually writing a song with meaning and result in large-scale cringing.

Nice try though, Shammy

]]> By: y_u_g_0 http://www.songwritingtipsonline.com/blog/05/kicking-lines-around-with-a-theme/#comment-82 y_u_g_0 Fri, 25 May 2007 12:07:00 +0000 http://songwritingtipsonline.com/blog/?p=101#comment-82 yeah, guess you just gotta laugh every now and then yeah, guess you just gotta laugh every now and then

]]> By: blue_daze http://www.songwritingtipsonline.com/blog/05/kicking-lines-around-with-a-theme/#comment-81 blue_daze Fri, 25 May 2007 02:40:00 +0000 http://songwritingtipsonline.com/blog/?p=101#comment-81 hey shamir! thanks for all the awesome tips i've received online..it really helps... hey shamir! thanks for all the awesome tips i’ve received online..it really helps…

]]> By: Shamir http://www.songwritingtipsonline.com/blog/05/kicking-lines-around-with-a-theme/#comment-80 Shamir Thu, 24 May 2007 17:59:00 +0000 http://songwritingtipsonline.com/blog/?p=101#comment-80 Star, about the line... "There's no such thing as a ugly person, but my man has to be fine"<br/><br/>....the word 'fine' is slang for good looking. Hence the contradiction, 'ugly' to 'fine'.<br/><br/>Many people (gals and guys) say that there are no ugly people in the world, yet their husband/wife or boyfriend/girlfriend must be universally good looking.... or 'fit' some say.<br/><br/>Shamir Star, about the line… “There’s no such thing as a ugly person, but my man has to be fine”

….the word ‘fine’ is slang for good looking. Hence the contradiction, ‘ugly’ to ‘fine’.

Many people (gals and guys) say that there are no ugly people in the world, yet their husband/wife or boyfriend/girlfriend must be universally good looking…. or ‘fit’ some say.

Shamir

]]> By: Anonymous http://www.songwritingtipsonline.com/blog/05/kicking-lines-around-with-a-theme/#comment-79 Anonymous Thu, 24 May 2007 14:21:00 +0000 http://songwritingtipsonline.com/blog/?p=101#comment-79 Thanks Shamir!!! Im always looking for new ideas and this one hits the top... Thanks Shamir!!! Im always looking for new ideas and this one hits the top…

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